Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>

Patch

r855127, r851476, r851392, r851314, r851300, r851288

r851288 | julianfoad | 2004-10-03 19:51:56 +0000 (Sun, 03 Oct 2004)

Fix niggles in the book.

Patch by: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>
(Tweaked by me.)

* doc/book/book/ch00.xml:
  Consistently use "command-line" rather than "commandline".

* doc/book/book/ch01.xml:
  Consistently use "command-line" rather than "commandline".
  Remove spaces around '&mdash;' to conform with the style guide.

* doc/book/book/ch02.xml:
  Clean up some redundant and awkward wording.

* doc/book/book/ch03.xml:
  Clean up some redundant and awkward wording.

* doc/book/book/ch05.xml:
  Remove spaces around '&mdash;'.

* doc/book/book/ch06.xml:
  Consistently use "command-line" rather than "commandline".

* doc/book/book/ch09.xml:
  Remove spaces around '&mdash;'.

r851300 | julianfoad | 2004-10-04 15:41:24 +0000 (Mon, 04 Oct 2004)

The book is now published and has a new name.  Update documentation files
accordingly.

Patch by: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>
(Tweaked by me.)

* HACKING:
  s/Subversion: The Definitive Guide/Version Control with Subversion/
  Update the description of the book, and give its direct web address instead
  of how to find it on Subversion's web site (which has changed slightly).

* doc/book/README:
  s/Subversion: The Definitive Guide/Version Control with Subversion/, etc.

r851314 | julianfoad | 2004-10-05 10:33:26 +0000 (Tue, 05 Oct 2004)

Add a FAQ entry about how to use external diff commands with "--diff-cmd" and
"--extensions".

Patch by: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>

* www/project_faq.html (diff-cmd): New question and answer.

r851392 | julianfoad | 2004-10-11 22:29:11 +0000 (Mon, 11 Oct 2004)

Language clean-up for misc-docs.

Patch by: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>
(Tweaked by me.)

* doc/book/misc-docs/directory_versioning.xml
  Singular vs. plural fix.
  Strike out-of-place 'a '.
  Strike extra space before </para>.

* doc/book/misc-docs/best_practices.xml
  "Mac OS" contains a space.
  Out-of-place period.
  s/can not/cannot/.

* doc/book/misc-docs/quick_walkthrough.xml
  Out-of-place 'the'.

r851476 | julianfoad | 2004-10-14 17:57:14 +0000 (Thu, 14 Oct 2004)

Clean up language nits in HACKING.

Patch by: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>

* HACKING:
  s/commit-access/commit access/
  s/code base/code/
  Include missing trailing slash on http://apr.apache.org (slashes are used
  sometimes and skipped sometimes, but they *are* part of the real URL).
  Clarify that the key for secure programming is developer understanding,
  not necessarily further education.
  Re-word 'staked ownership', as it was a sloppy idiom.
  Additional linguistic tweaks.

r855127 | dlr | 2005-06-14 16:29:18 +0000 (Tue, 14 Jun 2005)

* doc/README:
  Corrected spelling of the word "separate".

Patch by: Chris Pepper